Erotic Poetry Comments

Their connection is so strong their thoughts become one.

You made me shiver from your creamy river. *****

I love the beach scene and the amount of oral going on in this one, can never have too much that.

I love the imagery.

I love the petals and raging storm.

Mmmmm Love it

Well done, Mark.

I love this one, everything about it. You made me feel like I was there.

Evocative of the real thing. Well done.

black as a raven you threatened "nevermore"

but you crave our attention just like any whore

I knew you'd return and I pay you, 'cause, see-

unlike any whore your thoughts are free.

and so on.. XIII

Captured the eagerness we feel when we desire.

I love your writing

beautiful love story so cleverly constructed

No detail left out of shower scene — like reader is fly on the wall, but that is true of many of your prose piece.

you tell a good ode monsieur

It is beautifully simple and equally arousing.

"She did push a paper and asked me to sign,

A credit card application she is pointing to sign" - Funny... :)

I love the imagery and progression in this poem.

“Lost in the maelstrom of rapturous feeling,

Shattering cries as her climax is peaking.”

Sensational.

Nice rhyme scheme.

Thanks for the comment my dear shynalee :)

Indeed!

Very vulnerable girly lover: love it!!!

You have a way with words.

Hot, beautiful, and awe-inspiring. xoxo

SPROING haha Very Original! And I see Pixiehoff, herself wrote you a poem… 5 stars and silver linnings.

Hi M, why thank you!

Thanks Jeanne. xxx

There were a couple of passages I thought were good and the rest about 70% okay. I was going to spend longer on it but thought it would make a good starting point if I wanted to do more.

quite the epic ode = liked

beautiful scansion - smiles sweetly

Agreeing with Frodov here, this was really well done!

Sad but beautifully delivered. xoxo

A Kraken is a mythical creature; cud be a Giant Squid which may grow to 50 meters!!! The first verse , inter alia, states the Kraken has been released....Mythologically young maidens were sacrificed at the altar of Lust of this Sea Monster....thank you for the daring imagery....

This man is a fool

when he could drool

over your delicious pussy

he goes off to prove he's a wussy.

It's such a shame, he doesn't want to play,

With the curves that nature, so graciously lay.

The softness of skin, the warmth of embrace,

A treasure chest, a divine, sacred space.

I would drop everything, to spend some time,

With the one who ignites, a fire so divine.

To taste the...

Free choice, so they say, is our right,

But I confess that, try as I might

To reject sexy Mél

Is as stupid as hell

That bloke really is not very bright.

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