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Another great story. You do have the touch for creating such interesting characters!

5

Sad, really.

Hi Jayne, wow, that was a masterpiece of erotica. Superb writing to capture the full effect and impact of how turned on you were during this cam session and your body and mind felt during this masturbatory event with Tom - it was almost hotter than actually having sex with another...

Good pace!

Thank you

Insecurity its a part of life growing up and for most it will become a second nature …. Adding a different kind of liking or needs to this, like sapphic aspects, your school days can be outstanding horrible …. A short wonderful reality chapter with a lovely ending …. Yeah a part...

The start? Confusing. The ending? Boring

Oh my word, DK, this is one of your best yet. Shower sex is such fun, and your version is as hot as hell. I loved that you ruined your cuckold's orgasm too. It's such fun when they ooze, isn't it? This chapter deserves, and gets, 5 stars from me.

I want to say a few things and preempt some comments. To @rosenkavalier and those who followed along, I apologize for the wait. As my part 1 intro mentioned, I submitted the stories two days apart. Literotica has Admins who go through all submitted stories in the daily queue. As almost...

One twist to add spice to story would be that her vine makes her son stronger and longer. So being bred by your family strengthens his body and enhances his bond with the females in his family.

Its as if they are his missing pieces.

lovely little swap story, very erotic, well written,,to hell with threesomes, after that vacation i would be a commited swinger!!

I normally don't agree with anonymous comments, BUT, they all have understated the obvious. Thomas is the only character here even close to likeable. Pure bullshit.

Holy HELL!! I saw 65k words and thought, "No way will I finish this one." I figured I'd read a few paragraphs and move on to something else. Had a bit of a tough time with some of the Aussie slang ('cause "Merica") but, MAN, that was a fantastic read. Thank you for sharing!!

Made no sense at all.

Come on chapter 8!!!

Excellent please keep this going.

I am in total agreement with Coldxxx.

Plus, wherever the author is from English is not a language spoken there. Piss poor in every regard. A major college system encourages rampant infidelity at institution sponsored events? How fucking preposterous is that?

Definitely nowhere near your usual. It is hard to believe the comments of those who gave it a 5. I stretched to a 1.

This would be slightly less jarring to read, if it didn't have the intro about the wife actually having reasons. Like most of these stories, the wife was written like a person with severe mental illness, probably needing immediate psychiatric help. Delusions so severe are akin to...

GEEZ... what a cuck! Jennie fucks around twice, and it's not her fault? She just needs attention? What a crock of shit. There's no excuse for the whore.

I usually like Ohio's stories, but shit like this is just too unbelievable.

God I hope you continue this series.

"I woke up with the sunlight of a new day beaming into the window. I almost put the pillow over my head and went back to sleep. I did not feel well. Reaching over to my left in search of my wife, I discovered she wasn't in bed with me. As soon as I opened my eyes, my head started...

Wonderful story, glad they found what they wanted and get to experience it as a truly united couple!

Great chapter. Keep me coming please!

Bravo! Another great chapter! Thank you again for another entertaining read.

5 stars. Don't be concerned about Grammer. Hotness trumps everything. Hoping for more than Part 2. So many avenues to explore. Wondering who will be the aggressor, daddy or his little girl, and that their relationship doesn't stop at one fuck.

Also wondering who daddy was dreaming...

Loved this part. I only have a couple points having served in the US Navy, there is no such rank as Senior Master Chief. Senior Chief rank E8 and Master Chief rank E9. Next almost all the weapons you mentioned have magazines not clips. Otherwise this is a terrific story⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

that's so sweet, N4N! i am blushing, and not from shame but from happiness at being understood❤️

Why would anybody think this Indian crap would be of interest?

Please don't go any further on my account. Not my cuppa.

I expected Emily would jump on Paul's cock while Jack pushes her asshole. DP would run like a pump in perfect rhythm: when Paul is inside, Jack is outside. and vice versa. Emily falls on Paul's chest with continuous orgasm, then Alison says: my turn, and they fuck her, she barely...

Laila is a trooper and a keeper.

She is loyal to Russell.

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happyHooker485 over 6 years ago

If you don't like noncon, why read noncon?

I get that it's not everyone's cup of tea, but why take the time to read it and comment if you don't like it? Go find and enjoy something you do like, and stop...

Wow, that's pretty pathetic. Just the fact you have to try to explain it all should be an indicator there's something wrong there...

Amazing story