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I cannot believe. She will do it again. I cannot believe in her, or that he is doing anything other than deluding himself.

Dripping sissy cream as I read each chapter… going to share this with my hotwifey

“I’m in all pink. Pink panties, lace top thigh-high stockings with little pink bows in the front, open toed pink 3" heels with tiny ankle straps tied in a bow at the backs of my ankles, a pink frilly...

Spectacular as usual. Love your characters. They are always strong people. Looking forward to your next story! 5*

Great story and we'll written.

Man figures it out in time. Good for him.

This series was interesting, although I found it a bit too wordy for my liking. The sequel to, Self Discovery from Being Bullied, is a lesson on perfect sequel recap with getting bogged down in details.

That being said, once we finally got to action, it was steamy as always. The...

Very down to earth and realistic. Well thought out and written. The issues and hardships involved with the significantly burned victims when dealing with others can be very traumatic. You did a very good job portraying some of that. It was heart moving and brought both smiles...

nice job on this topic no one wants to talk about. Good read

10 Big Blazing Stars for writer. My feeling is that this story was very well done. Years ago with my first wife we did ALOT of Swinging. Usually two couples a day/night for about 6 months. This story brought back some of my memories about insecurities about swapping and letting another...

good CNC cheating setup. Could go any way with that in Chapter 2.

Very accurate. What is broken, cannot be fixed. What is damaged can be healed. There is a line between the two. He is correct in that he can never trust her again to be in his corner. She cares about him for what he does for her, not for him as himself.

Fun to read generally, but the frequent jumps with in the same sentence from third person to first person and back again were distracting. Also some dead ends, such as the car parts that were seemingly forgotten, the need to reinvent the company in order to redeem Bev’s job, and the...

I could not convince myself. She did it once, she'll do it again. Maybe not cheating, but some kind of betrayal. Cast out the demon.

Welcome back Androgynousother, We've missed you!

A good story with more of your slipped-in social and political comment (Kwasi's old boss was Crispin Odey, traitorous profiteering B*****d, betting against his own country for profit!), with plenty of your great characters and dialogue;...

I think that many readers and observers (like the person who left the last comment) don't really understand the mindset of the established cuckold. They seem to assume that he has been brought to this point under duress or through manipulation. While that is a legitimate possibility...

Great story - well done !!

Thank you, Emily. Yes, those of us who have been there know it - that "oh fuck!" moment "is she okay?" xxxxx

Great first part please continue

*Blushes* - did it show that clearly? I am so pleased that you like this series, Emily xxxxx

I am so glad you loved this Christie xxxxx

Loved this story and the cruel, manipulative dynamic between the characters was just brilliant!

Thank you for sharing your experience! It's so exciting to know that there are professionals who will assist their patients in fulfilling their special needs. It was a fantasy come true for the older guy, and for your hubby as well. And the way you relate this experience tells me...

@SathurnFox, I get it. I know even a dollar a month can be more than some people can do. And if it makes you feel any better, keep an eye out for it in the next few days. I put it up for a bit as early access for my Patreons, but then I'll be submitting it to Literotica, probably...

Good start. Keep the story going.

Oh yes there are always some sluts at heart out in the wilderness and especially sissy sluts or sissy whores …. I would volunteer too, sounds a good idea the government is trying to install, sissy whores as substitute whores for raunchy horny violent white men

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So inventive - and I like the human doubt cutting through the kink. That happens all the time. Is this right, have I gone too far, are the others OK? Gives the fantasy a sense of being grounded as opposed to many of the unrealistic stories here. And again, I appreciate the little...

great that the woman is the hero, broke free to escape the boat and the natives, took first shift with the life raft.

Hell no. Narcissists do not magically convert into humans.

Hey AE,

By this point he should be 15 years old by our standards. 16 by the standards of feudal Japan.

"That was harsh!"

Yeah it was. I wrote this chapter to sort of disillusion people of the fantasy of being a ninja.

Shinobi had to do some awful crap. And yes, I was ruthless in this...

Another great chapter. The sex is always fun to read, but character development is your real talent.

Funny as usual, and thank you for the digression. One of the most ridiculous erotica tropes is when the male protagonist confidently reels off the bra size of a woman he’s just met, as though he or the reader has any clue. With Ken, I feel that our heroines are in safer hands.

Please continue!

So hot!

Utter devastation by words. BTB is often unrealistic. Divorce is the norm in these cases and this one shows us a pretty reasonable response to what went wrong.

good drama