All Comments on 'Orphan Ch. 05-08'

This is a splendid story! You might consider publishing it after you have finished it.

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Excellent - thank you for your care in the dialogue and characterisation. I am reminded of CS Forrester's work in your writing

Keep writing, this is a good story.

Such a delight! I applaud your literary initiative. As you noted, this is not the sex drenched fare regularly offered but instead a sensual, foretelling of delights and adventures yet to come. Please, please continue.

Roxane has seen Alex basically stripped of most of his clothes, has attended to his surgery. Does sexyAlex have any sexy hair for his chest and abs? I think there is a developing love here. Please continue!

I love the build-up and tension more than the actual sex. It's why I skim through most of the stories on this site.

You are among the rare authors whose stories I could read again and again.

This was a great chapter, about to read the next.

Also, I'm pleased to see that the chapters are coming quickly.

Thank you for writing and keep it coming ☺️

You say that you desire genuine criticism.

Alas, there appears to be nought to criticise.