BDSM Story Comments

DreaMajor, Thank you! I tried to show Selene’s happiness being his first priority. I know these early chapters aren't perfect but I'm glad you liked it!

At first, I thought he was somewhat overly pedantic, but that thought was overwhelmed by how well you showed how thoroughly joyful and pleasurable a submissive’s experience can be under the hands of a loving dominant.

JohnAPeterson, thank you! My goal was to write the characters first and have their exploration of kink and polyamory be their adventure. I'm glad to hear you enjoy the story even if the category wouldn't normally be your thing!

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Anonymous, I'm glad you love the story! More is coming!...

What an extremely arousing story. I shall read on with interest xxxxx

Fantastic.......

OMG what a great story....you put my greatest fantasy into words....TQ

I find this work as appealing as a car incident scene…it is frankly disgusting and in the wrong category!!!!!!!

That blew me away

That blew me away

Really enjoyable. I hope to read more of those two or more of your stories.

Would love to hear more of this story

As a counterpoint to some other comments, and speaking as a bi, vers guy, I thought this was hot, fun and, hmm, evocative. BDSM is on my ‘type two’ want-to-but-haven’t list; probably won’t ever go there, so thanks for feeding my fantasies by having these characters discuss the possibilities!...

I'm not sure what is more disturbing ~ the characters who think the abusive actions on one's part is ok to the others, simply by getting a "reward", or the justification for the mental and physical abuse all to "pull the truth out". Only someone abused would think this sort of "playtime"...

Are Taylor and Jessica coming back? It'd be good to hear about them.

Are the young guy and James gonna double team both Nora's Mom and Katie's Mom? That'd be hot.

This is such a great story, my only complaint is this chapter left us hanging & the gap between chapters. I had forgot what had happened in previous chapters. But it is an excellent story thank you. Looking forward to more!!!!

Wow six years in a relationship and his GF hasn't even ever showed him her breasts? And he thinks of himself as a tough guy, a proud man? He must be setting all time jerk off records. Submission is great but there has to be some kind of payoff!

Really enjoying the world building as well as kink element 💕

Simply awesome- i hope it doesn't get to much dominating. A really great story- 5 Stars

You are a fucking phenomenal writer.

Everyone needs an Angel at least once in their lives!! lol

Nice story

Nice story!

You 'sow' dissent like you sow seeds. You 'sew' your torn trousers. This solecism aside the story is practically perfect in every way. Love it.

Will this ever continue?

MORE! I want MORE! fuck that I NEED MORE!!! Fucking love this story! I wish I never read it just so I can read it all over again? Does that make sense? Whatever, I NEED MORE!!!!

Thanks to everyone who is reading and enjoying the series so far. There will be a fourth chapter, not sure yet about a fifth. As for the commenters who don't like how cruel and over-the-top it is...let it be known that your words are falling on deaf ears. It's only gonna get more...

hope for part 2 of the part 2 hehehe, thanks for the story, starting promissing again, i really enjoy it

Absolutely need a continuation!

I love how you're exploring the mental aspect of submission. Keep it up.

Don't bother if you actually want non-con.

The wife planned the whole thing for her husband's money

I’ve very much enjoyed your stories. Obviously, your writing brings out strong emotions and opinions. True , reading what the professor willingly endures is painful and puzzling. But so are many of the other genres on this site. Readers’ strong reactions, including those that are...

Amazing story. Characters are vivid with their own personalities and motivations. I was not into BDSM but this story is a nice introductory to it. Together with polyamorous romance, I find this story very approachable to anyone.

That was amazing. So very subtle, smooth, gently steering but still achieving total control. Loved his naivity. Again, my pink cage hurt. Hope you'll find new inspiration!

I'm not going to dis anyone's work, but it's not for me. Larry is a big dummy, risking his marriage over getting too worked up over some porn. He has just become the outsider is his own marriage, the only one without power. It's easy to figure out what that means and I don't like...

No consent with the tattoo is a bit much.

This story is stunning in its ferocity, its rawness, its erotic charge. Well done….