Fan Fiction & Celebrity Story Comments

Don't make Castle a simp like you did on crossover with blur bloods. While Beckett was whoring around and castle was a second fiddle. If you are doing open relationship then be sure to do best for both not only Beckett to whore around let Castle have best fucks too

I had a great reading this. Will there be a sequel?

That was hot. Love big thick girls.

Lesbians. Hot.

Need to bring her daughter into this lexi would be good

I am starting to enjoy all your stories really to the deep extent. Even getting to know this is based on the show Riverdale and character named Cheryl Blossom made it even more intense to feel the character undergo everything with such a pretty little face.

Very hot! Damn...

well worth the wait for part two, excellent, horny and well written, great stuff

Wishing for the continuation of this! Tony needs to be Penny’s “sugar grandpa”! More please?

Derivative, formulaic, self-serving…all of your stories in this genre involve anal almost exclusively. Your writing has stagnated. BTW, degradation and humiliation are not synonymous with love. One commenter asked where’s the romance gone, don’t look for it with this author. The foundation...

Удивлен, что там Кассандра и Сара)) Разве они не с Шоном? Или эти события происходят ДО выставки в Лас-Вегасе?

Я надеюсь, что автор создаёт так целостную вселенную, а не использует одних и тех же персонажей в разных ситуациях

This is so hot, Abby, you keep up the pace well and lead the reader on to a satisfying climax xxxxx

Maybe it's my own proclivity, but the strap-on activity seemed somewhat perfunctory. And I'd prefer strapless with both anal and vaginal plugs and multiple vibrators (though I think this story pre-dates them) which entail both more effort and more sensation on the part of the giver....

I love it!

I really enjoyed this story. Didn’t realize I had a diaper fetish. That was so hot! Instant erection for this guy!

This is the best of all the Sexfight matches!

Two of my favorite actresses. Thank you for sharing

I like short quick stories like this. Keep ‘em coming.

Very exciting! I love the whole Celebrity Sexfight series! Please bring us more!

Squirting really turns me on! I’m glad you seem to be fascinated with it also. Please give us more stories like this,

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Если честно, то удивляет, что девушки в этой сфере имеют узкие влагалища и так легко кончают. Не хочу выглядеть ханжой или ретроградом, но я почему-то думаю, что узкими эти части тел уже точно быть не могут, ну а про чувствительность и говорить странно. При их активности чувствительность...

What a shame you hate yourself so much. You write pretty good stories, so you clearly have talent. Pity you have such self loathing. 1*

@CapnH00k Thanks for the kind words! Agreed about the length. I like to post a complete story rather than chapter by chapter because, while I don't think every chapter of a story needs a sex scene, there should be a sex scene in anything you're going to post here, and I didn't feel...

Keep up the good work

Looking forward to part two.

Yet another wherein I couldn't even finish the first Page due to all of the mistakes, mainly punctuation.

Promissing

Do NOT write about an imaginary situation and use the word if you can't spell it!!!

Before she's topless, I am without interest. Innumerable mistakes!!!

Next one will be coming in the next few days

Is there any romance in erotica anymore?

Honestly hope you continue/focus on writing this and it doesn’t get shelved for another 6+ months like you said this chapter did

Keep the pot simmering, with luck Felicia will orgasm without touching herself.

Have Peter take MJ right beside Felicia where she can feel the power of his thrusts.

Voting C, Making Felicia watch will drive her nuts with lust.

Hmmm No way to break free, at the mercy of MJ, Felicia and MJ are sensual creatures,,, Lots of possibilities