Reluctance & Ravishment Story Comments

Hi everybody thank you so much for your support and kind words!

I submitted chapter 8 last night (may 7) So hopefully it will be published soon!

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Mmm-mm! Officer Dill! Yes please!

I was expecting a train

maybe you could write a short intermezzo: Sunday morning her father and a friend come to visit her. Surprised she opens the door dressed only in a t-shirt. The friend immediately sees whats going on, an things get terribly out off hand

I would love to read that!

OMG. Too much. I think I almost had a heart attack. I just can't wait until I can feed this to an AI and make a movie. I might never have to leave the house again. Portersky is a sex genius.

Interesting, arousing start of what I hope is a story the author continues.

Lactation/brest expansion without pregnancy. Ropes on her breasts. It's time to really use those titties.

But this one’s top of the bunch. Damn! So many holes!

Not sure this fits in the noncensent category but great story! He definitely wasn't saying no

Fun thought exercise-- I imagine crime would indeed plummet in this world, but I think ruination would also come because ambition plummets too. How much of my ambition in my young-adult days were tied to "get/keep woman?" I am guessing a lot. The modern age, in the west, is basically...

Fuuuuuuk. Definitely the hottest so far. OMG. You write so well.

I can't help but wonder; what happens when Hellie runs errands? She could have her holes filled with vibrating toys and her nipples and clothes clamped wearing a thin white dress on a rainy day trying to shop at target...

Then she reported the rape, had a kit done and sued the HOA for a couple million dollars. John went to prison and his ass got tore up on the daily. The end.

She's starting to loose her personality. Is that on purpose? It was nice to see glimmers of her non fuck doll self. Can you sprinkle some of those elements back in?

Very hot

Lol ...Lol. You're better than this JustJennaJ. Lol.

An easy five stars. I think you're off to a hot, great start. Good work!

That's it? You just end it there, incomplete?

Very enjoyable story.

Azazel is my favorite character you have written. I SOBBED so hard when he died and thru reading til the end!!! Ugh! Love love love your stories!! I had a feeling this one would be an intense 18 pages.

Love this. Glad to see Phillip finally man up a bit for his love

The premise of a slave market is certainly appealing - but....this is, in essence, a page of exposition, describing the setting but not delivering any kind of plot progression. If there is a plot line to come, this first place will have more validation.

Part 4 is a good amount longer :) soon to come.

Haha one step at a time!

This series was interesting, although I found it a bit too wordy for my liking. The sequel to, Self Discovery from Being Bullied, is a lesson on perfect sequel recap with getting bogged down in details.

That being said, once we finally got to action, it was steamy as always. The...

great that the woman is the hero, broke free to escape the boat and the natives, took first shift with the life raft.

Another great chapter. The sex is always fun to read, but character development is your real talent.

good drama

Great story, looking forward to future chapters. Hoping this stays noncon/reluctant too.

It’d be interesting if she had daughters and they where sexual attraction to Rob when they grow up

I gave it 5 stars, even though I thought the ending was a bit rushed.

There were a few typos that were very confusing until I looked at my keyboard and saw the keys that were next to each other, but only one of them actually made me stop to hunt for the correct word.

Good story but it seemed to wrap-up very quickly. Several story lines still dangling (Ex Boyfriend, Best man Married Wife chaser, etc.).

Let if he fucks the school’s police officer next

Thank you! I enjoyed the series.

Revenge certainly is a dish best served hot. I can't wait to see where you take this. I feel, like me, you might have been bullied in school....

Outstanding and Well developed story that was entertaining. 5 stars for the great work and so well presented and good story and plot. High marks for this one. Cheers

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