Sci-Fi & Fantasy Story Comments

Quite a good first chapter.

I only read it for the name Wade Wilson aka deadpool.

I'm actually looking forward to more.

This interlude really was excessive.

Not seeing how it moves the story.

Unless you intend Greg to lose his soul.

What a chapter!!!

Interesting start. Thanks

Good story. I especially love the spontaneous orgasms girls around the MC experience whenever he transforms.

I had initially thought the title 'Divine Gambit' was wrong, as there hasn't been anything divine so far, but there's a hint of it in this chapter I think.

Looking forward...

The story is always amazing.. i have been hooked since tge frist part i read. But please to prevent us from been bored waiting a year cycle for each book. Can't you just make the chapters come in longer time sequence. Say for instance 2 chapters a month that way.. we already edge...

I'm happy that a story on literotica talks of vegetarianism.

He finally remembered the password from the account. Anyway, glad to see you back, I hope the next chapter comes sooner than this one.

This is a cute, silly and fun read. Great characters with interesting interactions. You have a wonderful imagination and it definitely shows in this story. Thanks for posting it.

Another great chapter thanks for writing!

The only note I have is that you seem to be having some trouble in these last three chapters keeping names straight.

It was readily apparent after the first five pages that the author has little to no experience with what they are attempting to write about. How the military operates and horses to name just two. I tried to muddle through, but lost any interest before completing page 10.

Very fun I hope this continues.maybe pov changes?

just "finished" tsm this also doesn't have a finish? 1 star

Bitches be cray craaay! But they be the best in bed.

Excellent story! Love the X-Men!

Poor Jean Grey. :(

I know this is literotica,but you cheated on telling a good story by wasting chapters on descriptive sex,so much so I simply scrolled through most of it looking to get on with the story..this submission was a bust for me..2 stars..JzK..You got my attention expecting a SiFy tale,but...

5*****

Great story but...... where are the other sites that have this story, been waiting for months dose anyone know where i can read more?

Bum Buuuh Buum! Loving this story so far.

Thanks, Anonymous.

I like the idea!

I have something in that general direction that I'm writing on Chapter 4.

Thank you for sharing your talents with us. Brought me to tears several times.

Really fun story! Aside from a few unfortunate typos that made things a little hard to follow sometimes, I really enjoyed the blending of the free use setting with a blossoming relationship.

Very good would love more high jinx of this nature

I keep coming to this story from time to time. Binge read over a four day period. Part of me wants more from this world, but the other part knows that a different story line could fall flat. If you write more I will definitely read it.

You motherfucker, why do you do this to me! 5* P.S. If Allie dies I will haunt you ass.

This is good. Keep going.

Yes, please continue. This was a very engrossing tale that also provided insight into the complex mental challenges faced by those that serve. Thank you for your service.

Can't wait for the next part good job

I find that you should write at least 2 more stories you left everything on a cliffhanger

Finally! I was waiting with bated breath for another chapter! So awesome! Can’t wait for more please continue!

Welcome back and another great chapter. I am torn between this series and the quaranteam series you do on which one is my favorite. I am happy to say while the sex is good the writing and story are great. Great job!

@Anon I’m glad it’s coming across that way. I wanted book one to focus on Myta and Esur, having a very focused relationship on the D/s aspect of BDSM.

There’s some other light play to accompany it, obviously. But that’s where they live.

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I follow 3 series. War of the Races, Home for Horny Monsters and yours. I look forward to reading new chapters in all. Font of Fertility is the one I look forward to the most.