Lesbian Sex Story Comments

Brilliant,,, Yes❣️

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Hallo LK!

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It isn't a totally new concept, and I can't wait to see where your going with this... however, my Black Queen, has a slightly more guarded opinion.

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I never felt that I was guilty of buying and selling other human beings... but...

As always, thank you for your comments Alice. I feel that exploration of BDSM necessitates realistic exploration of the pain, hence my use of intense detail. I hope you continue to read and enjoy the series.

Loving this series. Can’t wait for more chapters!!

very good and so loving not just sex which on its own is so very boring

Revenge

It's incomplete. It ends with a "cliffhanger" sentence, then offers no more. Doing that is giving a promise of more, then nothing more s given.

I just wanted to point out that franticly is spelled wrong. It should be FRANTICALLY

Thank you, Emily. Yes, those of us who have been there know it - that "oh fuck!" moment "is she okay?" xxxxx

*Blushes* - did it show that clearly? I am so pleased that you like this series, Emily xxxxx

I am so glad you loved this Christie xxxxx

So inventive - and I like the human doubt cutting through the kink. That happens all the time. Is this right, have I gone too far, are the others OK? Gives the fantasy a sense of being grounded as opposed to many of the unrealistic stories here. And again, I appreciate the little...

“I peeled off the latex hood, getting my ponytail entangled as I did so.” It’s little details like this, which make this feel like lived experience. If that’s artifice, it’s very good artifice. This is why I was never a real sub, I just need to cum too much 😊 Emily

Well I ammend my previous comments related with parenthood. Here the whole topic is approached more seriously.

And those characters are lovely again, specially Tina. Who finally ends up not asking for relationships just to discover she's alrealdy in. Readers will agree Heather coming...

Lovely end , mahy be a bit too rushed. Including a new partner at the family and coming out to the chilldren all at the same time might be more dramatic. However characters are lovely and feelings very well explained, congrats cariad.

Thank you so much Emily - coming from a writer I admire like you, that means a lot - 5⭐️

"Pussy by proxy for Piper” - such a delightful phrase. This is a heady mix of existing kinks and intriguing new ones for me 5⭐️ and I love it ❤️ Emily

This was lovely. I would love to read the next parts.

Thank you so much, darling Emily xxxxx

Thank you so much Migbird - so glad you enjoyed it xxxxx

Debaucherous message; sex is the storyline; tells the story. Loved the closing scene; so like you.

Thank you so much, Qwer, such lovely comments make me think I can go on with this xxxxx

5⭐️ - the same thing was happening to me as Piper by the end ☺️ Emily

I am enjoying this series though I felt that the nipple clamping incident was a little too realistic for my tastes, I could genuinely feel Roisin's pain though I guess that can be taken as a compliment for the writer's penmanship.

Brilliant, just so so good!

OUTSTANDING AND FANTASTIC such a fun 5 Star love story that has it all. These two are a fun loving couple and could easily have a few more chapters of love and sexual exploration. Cheers to a story well done.

Thank you so much, Christie_Ann, the next part is now up xxxxx

Thank you so much, Anonymous - well, Piper cannot have everything she wants - or can she? xxxxx

This is very well-written and imaginative.

It's not bad but Ms. Rivers initial attraction and desire for the security woman took away from the build up. Had Ms. Rivers been caught off guard or she was in a way surprised by the advances it would have been better. Just a perspective - not a call for war.

I loved this story, my head was swimming with thoughts of power, lust and submission. I would so love a follow up with roles reversed. Thank you so much

I am totally drawn in deeper than before. I am hanging on each turn in this tale and can't wait for more. Thank you Pixie

This is so wild, I loved every word and will read the next installment straight away. Thank you again Pixie

Great writing, great story.

I’m relly not into stories with supernatural elements. But how the story evolves, Wanda, really hit me as beautiful and utterly romantic. Isea’s ultimate sacrifice, becoming mortal, must be the ultimate expression of love.

A very sexy and enticing entry. Something about a panty mask just sends such excitement through me.

I loved this entry and am excited for the next one.