Recent reader comments on Mind Control sex stories.
You my friend are a bloody genius this story just keeps getting better and better I mean all 13 pages were fantastic and I can’t wait for the next instalment 10 stars easily.
All Comments/ReplySo good, so erotic. They don't even have sex and it's just so erotic. Why isn't there more of this?
All Comments/ReplyI love it so far...please, please, please bring more to this site...please and thank you.
All Comments/ReplyHow in the world did the author make clothes shopping erotic? Like son very erotic. I am hooked on the story too. I am very disappointed this story hasn't been updated.
Story ideas in case the author has writer's Block:
Now that Levi was punked out at the mall, he has to commit...
All Comments/ReplyVery well done. I hope you continue creating more stories in this universe. A husband and wife one would be interesting.
All Comments/ReplyI just wish it was all 3rd person.
All Comments/Replyenjoyable premise, why not slow down and play with it a bit!?
All Comments/ReplySpectacular.
All Comments/ReplyAmazing work! I'm having a delightful time going through your catalogue. Have to say, this one left me curious about the epilogue, whether Ramon and Becky get together. I'd like to think they do; despite how "sleazy" he's described (and he is), I think they'd make a cute couple.
All Comments/ReplyI too am hoping that this is just the opening salvo and there's more incestuous / mind-controlled feminization to follow! ❤️🔥
All Comments/ReplyI'm enjoying these stories in difference to other mind-control themes where the woman is mistreated and led into debauchery.
You handle the theme with love and compassion from both sides, Stirring the emotions for the reader as well.
All Comments/ReplyAmusing. But is this a dream or a nightmare for Noah and Luis?
All Comments/ReplyAbout Nia's control: I think it would work in the following way:
Oracle first matches someone against the primary (usually the male, now the female Nia). If that match is good enough, then the program checks to see whether the new woman can fit in with all the rest of the team. The...
All Comments/ReplyIntereating start, although i hope there won't be any more death. Plus i hope the protagonist manages to keep at least some of his humanity and doesn't turn evil like the writer of the manifesto, there are more than enough stories like that on this site.
All Comments/ReplyHari is so sexy when he is risking his entire poly families lives by playing the hero. I also love the way most of his girls have nothing to do but wait for their turn to get fucked by him.
All Comments/Replyreally confer on this one. Weird he's treating Becca as HUS mistress,
All Comments/ReplyIt's good to give.
All Comments/ReplyYou never disappoint. Kudos for another awesome chapter. Keep them coming and keep us guessing.
All Comments/ReplyBrilliant chapter. It's a shame about Jimmy.
All Comments/ReplyFLR only makes sense. Since women are by far superior to us males it only makes sense that the women are in charge and one thing I know that reminds me of that is when the males in a family are always naked while the girls and women are clothed, regardless of who our guests are....
All Comments/ReplyBrilliant. One suggestion I would like to make is when Pete presumably catches up with Marco, he should use Marco's apparent Acrophobia, which he seemed to display when he stood atop Pete's city wall, as a weapon against him. I'm already looking forward to the next update.
You have...
All Comments/ReplyGreat story! Really enjoyed the twists and turns.
All Comments/ReplyMy biggest problem isn't that he's weak, but that he enslaved Sophia despite her definitely not asking for it, and having no idea if it would turn out well or she'd be brain dead. Just wildly goes against everything else he's done.
All Comments/ReplyI love and hate this in a very sweet way. God I just want to be wanted, and it’s messed up how I feel that more when reading something supernatural, by nature, impossible, than I do in real life. What is it like to be the center of someone’s desires? Forget multiple people, just to...
All Comments/ReplyThat was a pretty sudden shift in Seb character. Not willing to do anything to my best friend is my slave. Oh well, things moving along at least.
All Comments/ReplyOmg pls keep the story going!! <3
All Comments/ReplyTime for mommy to listen to some soothing sounds.
All Comments/ReplyGood idea, fantastic execution
All Comments/ReplyNext part might take a bit, as I need to do some heavy thinking about where I want this to go.
All Comments/ReplyNever just good or bad, always mixed bag
All Comments/ReplyIncredible story. Please keep writing! It would be fantastic as a series
All Comments/ReplyThis is a great exploration of some very weird stuff, a lot of fun.
All Comments/ReplyI am impotent. A combination of age and diabetes. But I would still want a copy of the book if it existed.
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