Romance Story Comments

This was a great series. I have always enjoyed the way you weave your tales. This one is right up there with your best productions.

Thanks for creating such a lovely tale.

Heep Writing

JH4Fun

What a pleasure to read your stories. Thank you sir.

Loved.the.entire.series, well done. I did feel the final chapter felt rushed, but otherwise really enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

I was hoping they’d figure it out. That was a fun one.

> One is most definitely a leg boy -- I can see it in his eyes, and a randy one at that. I speak with his mother regularly -- she said that he would be here tonight. She's ready for him to be placed."

Can't wait for the Mother's appearance.

Just a great series. Wonderful ending.

WOW! What a fill-in of Macy's background, with a little of John's thrown in too. Just wonderful.

This is getting to be a quite big story, but I keep enjoying all the chapters as they arrive.

Can't wait for the next one to arrive!

One of the best feel good romances on this site. It has like it been in my favorites and I often return to it.

5 stars

Excellent! So glad you are still writing for us, Mr. Other.

This was awesome part to this story. I liked the sex parts and OMG I loved that she used the bathroom room with him present and that he peed with her present too

Thank you. I loved it, loved the characters and it made me happy.

Wonderful story.Thank you very much!!

WONDERFUL, 10 stars is't enough. Betty Other, the super model got hers, and so did Brian. 4 wonderful kids (not 2 adopted), and love from each other, always. Now, mum and dad are ready for grandchildren from their 2 oldest kids! WONDERFUL, you are better than excellent!!

Wonderful!!

As an Aussie myself I find there are not many here on Lit, but those I've found seem to be very good & I class you with them!

Looking forward to whatever you bring our way, Thanks heaps for sharing with us all.

DuMont finally got what he deserved. A pathetic little man who let a foolish childhood issue cloud his thinking and judgment.

And Brian found his dream woman and happiness in his life. Great story and thanks for the effort

Perfect ending. Story came together with a nice little bow. I'm glad this story fell into the romance category rather than the LW, it fits better here. Not a big fan of LW. Hope you don't forget of your Lit fans when you go on to different ventures. Your a great writer and I look...

Another great one. Wishing you the best and great success in your further writing.

I am on record as being a big fan of yours - I even mentioned it at the beginning of one of my efforts.

However this story is the one that has got me checking to see if the next part had arrived like none before. I loved it. I don't cry easily, Mr Other, but I have cried with this....

Final twist was really funny

Very nice story

Great story, but it’s not always Alzheimer’s. My wife suffered from Lewy Body Dementia for over two years until she fell out of bed at the home and fractured her vertebrae in her lumbar area. She passed away 3 weeks later.

Earle

Loved the story and the characters! A BIG 5+!

4.5 stars. I'm very miffed that the cheating skank got a happy end (and ended up rich undeservedly). But the rest of the story made it only a 0.5 deduction.

Very well done!!!

One of my all-time favorites.

A really great story, I really wish you would finish it.

Good story, but the shifts in time weren't obvious and caused some confusion and rereading to follow the story.

Just wonderfully beautiful

This story does not belong in the Romance category at all.

Do you own coffe stock? It almost seemed like somebody was offering the stuff every other paragraph 😎

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It was a quality story. I didn’t buy the reconciliation though. Just too much time had elapsed making it very hard to accept that Erica never found someone else in all that...

This is a LW story about an unforgivable cheating wife who faced no consequences for undetermined, but extensive, long term cheating, Her boos whom she was cheating with faced nothing, not even having his wife informed. No way he should ever forgive Monique, nor should her daughter....

Mr. Other owes Brian DuMont, a physical beating within an inch of his rotten life. Mrs Betty Other owes that rotten scumbag, big time, for trying to harm her, as well as her husband. Betty should through her BC pills away, to give her daughter and son a sibling ASAP. No matter what...

Yeah ... I get it... I mean wasn't her husband ever hard? For real, just between us, I'm still kinda amazed by how hard my husband's cock gets. Maybe I projected a little.

Your post made me feel happy all day!!! I'm so glad you are enjoying it!

They will get there, I promise!

I’ve loved a lot of your stories but the others??? I wish you would give the main guy a set of balls and also throw in a brain! I get so tired of seeing everyone manipulating him and even if he halfway stands up for himself he finally gives in. LM